The only criticism I have to make is your use of too many technical
terms and too many words, which necessitate the use of the dictionary.
I pride myself on my knowledge of the English language. I very
seldom find it necessary to have recourse to a dictionary. In

going through your book, however, I find it is necessary to have

a dictionary right at my elbow. Whether or not the same applies

to other coaches I have no idea, but it did apply in my case.

Other than that, I think it is splendid and that you are deserving

of the gratitude of every coach and player in the country.

Kind personal regards to your own good self, to Mrs. Allen and the
children,

Sincerely,

Pa Cee

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